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Dust and Dirt, a review of 3:10 to Yuma

121rjd — Thu, 08 May 2008 03:51:15 +0000

Movies, depending on their content are viewed with a certain bias. But viewers should not always judge a book by its cover. 3:10 to Yuma is a western movie of a new generation. Its modernized picture, with classic character motif and attitudes took a film with great potential and shot it strait to the top. 3:10 to Yuma is a film that anyone can enjoy. It is the epitome of entertainment. Whether a family, a couple, or a group of friends going to catch a matinee, any and all can sit down with a giant tub of hot popcorn and a tall icy cup of coke and become mesmerized by this eloquently written film. The constant suspense, action, meaningful dialogues, and passionate tones keeps viewers sitting on the edge of their seats and anxious for more. I feel that this cowboy movie is good enough to fall into the same category with some of the 20^th century classics. 3:10 to Yuma should be held in the highest regards. When comparing this DVD with other 20^th century success such as Hang em High, and The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly the movie 3:10 to Yuma shows equal quality to the other movies. The other two movies stared actor Clint Eastwood, one of the most prestigious actors of this era, with 3:10 to Yuma great success the actors staring in the film will hopefully be awarded equal respect.

Although cowboy movies are not commonly known to be works of art, 3:10 to Yuma is an absolute masterpiece: fives stars and two thumbs up. The detail and pure excellence in every scene only supported its award-winning title. The director, James Mangold, and producer of this film paid special attention to making sure that every scene was preformed and staged perfectly. They wanted the viewer to feel as if they too where part of this intense action. 3:10 to Yuma is a 2007 Academy Award nominated film that is a remake of the original which debuted in1957. Thus making it the second film based on Elmore Leonard’s short story. The fact that this movie was a remake of the original put extra stress on the success of the movie. Mangold knew that most of the viewers, as well as critiques, would be comparing this movie to the original from 1957. This extra pressure is why he made sure that every aspect of the movie was perfect. James Mangold paid special attention to hiring actors that would contribute to the remake of this story. For the two leading roles Mangold chose Russell Crowe and Christian Bale who are both prestigious and excellent actors their extraordinary acting skills helped to make this movie a success. The flawless acting in conjunction with the complex and page-turning plot and deep meaning of ever scene truly forced me to realize it’s potential.

Along with the films physical attributes, the sound, imagine, and filming are a unique bonuses. As a unique characteristic of this film, Mangold wanted the movie to be filmed on site. This element allows for a very natural feel to the film, allowing viewers to relate to the conditions that the characters are subjected to. There is a particular night scene where our villain, hero, and all the other associates are sitting around a fire antagonizing each other. It is here, one can really appreciate the beautiful setting with the crisp sounds of a hot orange fire crackling in the night. The light thrown from the fire illuminates the actor’s faces and they glow in the night. The empty lonely silence of the darkness, added a mysterious suspense to an audience already on the edge of their seats. During this scene the gigantic rocks that surround the fire where our characters lurk behind them, only leaving one guessing what kinds of trouble they are being led into.

Another very impressive scene involves Bed Wade getting to spend an evening in Dan Evans house. It is in this scene that he is able to eat and socialize with his family. This is an unfortunate event; Dan Evan’s blood begins to boil as his wife unfaithfully begins to fall for Wade’s charm. Evans wife is obviously not as supportive and loving as she should be. Many views look down upon Mrs. Wade as she disrespects her husband who is sitting across the dinner table, and stares into Ben Wades eyes. Wade continues to complement her as she allows such an act. It is these complex and emotional scenes contributed to this movies success.

There have been various other reviews of 3:10 to Yuma all of which have been generally positive comments. 3:10 to Yuma had a great deal of expectations to live up to after the original was debuted. Most people were not let down after watching the newest version. All of Mangold’s efforts were rewarded when the audience sat down and happily had their expectations exceeded. The realities portrayed in each film however, added a unique depressing factor to the overall situation faced by Dan Evans, the main character played by Christan Bale. An interesting, yet complex plot somehow manages to be easily understood.

Although the plot is great, there are still some flaws that hinder the general review of the film. In my opinion, one of the biggest issues with this film is the angle that’s one of the action scenes were shot. The plot is very different from most other western movies, but there were still those classic battles. The fresh characters, which were jaded in the 1957 film, were greatly in need of improvement. Yes, it does include an outlaw, a bounty, and various monetary issues, but the charismatic, charming ways of our villain surprisingly moves viewers to fall for him and sympathize with him. Dan Evans (Christian Bale) is a hardworking man, but he has bad luck, and no money. His family is ashamed of their farm, his wife is loosing her love for him, and only one of his sons respect him. These characteristics allow viewers to empathize with him and create a relationship with the character. However he is a Civil War veteran, and has a great shot at attaining his dream of being successful and well respected! Don’t worry gun fans, there are plenty of quickly drawled revolvers. Dan Evans runs into the railroad owner in a bar after being equated with Ben Wade, played by Russell Crowe. He is offered $200, which at the time was a rather large sum of money, just for aiding in the successful transport of this murderous thief. He sees transporting the prisoner as a chance to make money, and make a name for himself, and gain some respect for his family. During the journey to the train, which is where our title comes from, (3:10 pm train to Yuma Prison) Ben Wade kills his captors one by one. There are struggles, fights, bullets zooming, and a very emotional death at the end. But our tragic hero succeeds. It is a fantastic move that keep its viewers on the edge of his or her seat.

In the final analysis, 3:10 to Yuma is a fantastic cinematic journey into the western days. Christian Bale and Russell Crowe are fantastic actors who portrayed their characters in a flawless action. Despite minor adjustments some would have made to the film, it is worth its ratings and rave reviews in every way. Between the overall success in direction and production it is a well-rounded, classic-styled, five star film that anyone can enjoy. 3:10 to Yuma is a fantastic story of a man overcoming adversity, and proving to himself and his family that they should be proud of their name. Enjoy

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floating workshop

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review discovery draft

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Essay 3: Draft 1 Progress Report

(Please write your answers on the lines below the questions)

Your Name _______Rosario_________________________________________ Number of words of draft ________

TOPIC & THESIS: What is the object you are evaluating?

3:10 To Yuma, the film

What are the standards of value you using to make your evaluation? List here. Are these stated directly or indirectly in the draft? Explain.

I am trying to write a great review.

What is your over arching judgment of the object?

Positive

Is your thesis sufficiently complex to indicate the mixed feelings you may have toward the object?

I do not have mixed feelings, but I do feel that my feeling are clear.

What is your thesis?

Stating that 3:10 To Yuma is a great movie.

Did you state it explicitly in the draft? (You are not required to). Why did or didn’t you put it in the draft?

I need to make a better thesis.

PURPOSE: Other than fulfilling the requirements of the assignment, what is your primary purpose in writing this essay? What do you want your readers to believe as a result of reading your essay?

To promote 3:10 To Yuma, and tell people how great the movie is.

AUDIENCE: You must choose a specific publication that you are writing for. What is it? Why this publication?

All

List three ways that you have used language that would appeal to a general audience and not an audience of college students.

I use complex words that are very descriptive.

DEVELOPMENT: What kinds of evidence are you using to support your judgment? Examples? Comparisons with other subjects of the same type? Expert opinions? Other?

I watched the move, I may not be an expert, but I know the movie well.

What source(s) will you list on your Works Cited page?

Some move sites.

ORGANIZATION: ? Does your opening paragraph introduce, describe, and summarize the subject you are evaluating? Is there sufficient information for your reader who doesn’t know your subject?

Yes

On a separate sheet of paper, outline your draft. Does your outline present an argument in support of your thesis claim that follows the reasons proof pattern? Explain.

Examine your draft for transitions for each new developing paragraph. What do you need to do to make your transitions stronger?

My transitions are good, and flow each paragraph together.

PRELIMINARY ASSESSMENT: What are you most pleased with in this draft? Be specific.

I am not filly pleased, it needs to be longer, it does not meet the work count requirement.

List any problems you are having with this draft and write down any questions you have about the assignment or your work.

I need to stretch my paper, but I do not want to add fluff, or bore the reader. I may describe every scene.

Rosario DiGangi

April 23, 2008

English 1000C

Professor Leston

Discovery Draft

Review:

“3:10 to Yuma”

3:10 to Yuma is a western of a new generation. Its modernized picture, with classic character motif and attitudes took a film with great potential and shot it strait to the top. 3:10 to Yuma is a film that anyone can enjoy. It is the epitome of entertainment, wither a family, a couple, or a notorious group of friends going to catch a matinee, any and all can sit down with a giant tub of hot popcorn, and a tall icy cup of coke and become mesmerized. The constant suspense, action, meaningful dialogues, and passionate tones keep viewers anxious for more. I feel that this cowboy movie is good enough to fall into the same category with some of the 20^th century classics. 3:10 to Yuma should be held in the highest regards. Put this DVD right next to “Hang em High,” and “The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly,” films that stared Clint Eastwood, probably the most accomplished western star of all time, soon the actors of 3:10 to Yuma will be granted equal respect.

Although cowboy movies are not commonly known to be works of art, 3:10 to Yuma is an absolute masterpiece, fives stars, and two thumbs up. The detail and pure excellence in every scene only supported its award-winning title. 3:10 to Yuma is a 2007 Academy Award nominated film that is a remake of the original which debuted in1957. Thus making it the second film based on Elmore Leonard’s short story. The film is directed by James Mangold and stars Russell Crowe and Christian Bale… the flawless acting in conjunction with the plot twists, and deep meaning of ever scene truly forced me to realize it’s potential.

The Plot is perfect, and different from most other westerns. Yes, it does include an outlaw, a bounty, and various monetary issues, but the charismatic, charming ways of our villain surprisingly moves viewers to fall for him. Dan Evans (Christian Bale) is a hardworking man, but he has bad luck, and no money. His family is ashamed of their farm, his wife is loosing her love for him, and only one of his sons respect him. However he is a Civil War veteran, and has a great shot! Don’t worry gun fans, there a plenty of quickly drawled revolvers. Dan Evans runs into the railroad owner in a bar after being equated with Ben Wade (Russell Crowe). He is offered $200, which at the time was a rather large sum of money, just for aiding in the successful transport of this murderous thief. He sees transporting the prisoner as a chance to make money, and make a name for himself, and gain some respect for his family. During the journey to the train, which is where our title comes from, (3:10 pm train to Yuma Prison) Ben Wade kills his captors one by one. There are struggles, fights, bullets zooming, and a very emotional death at the end. But our tragic hero succeeds. It is a fantastic move that keep its viewers on the edge of his or her seat.

Invention

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good paper?

121rjd — Tue, 22 Apr 2008 02:51:41 +0000

For unit three, I decided to write a review on the film “3:10 to Yuma.” It is a 2007 Academy Award nominated film that is a remake of the 1957 film. Thus making it the second film based on Elmore Leonard’s short story. The film is directed by James Mangold and stars Russell Crowe and Christian Bale. I feel that this “Cowboy” Movie is good enough to fall into the same category with some of the classic, best, westerns of all time. Such as “Hang em’ High,” and “The Good, The Bad, and the Ugly.” Films that stared Clint Eastwood, probably the most accomplished western star. Christian Bale’s acting was amazing along with the plot twists and deeper meaning of ever scene truly forced me to realize it was a masterpiece.

The Plot is perfect, and different from most other westerns. Yes it does include an outlaw, and a bounty, and various monetary issues, but the charismatic, charming ways of our outlaw…surprisingly moves viewers to like him, in an odd, attractive way. Dan Evans (Christian Bale) is a hardworking man, but he has bad luck, and no money. His family is ashamed of him, his wife is loosing her love for him, and his son does not respect him. However he is a Civil War veteran, and has a great shot! He sees transporting this prisoner as a chance to make money, and make a name for him, and gain some respect for his family. During the journey to the train (3:10 pm train to Yuma Prison) Ben Wade kills his captors one by one. There are struggles, fights, shooting, and a very sad death at the end. But our tragic hero succeeds. It is a fantastic move that keep its viewers on the edge of his or her seat. I can’t wait to write a review on ever scene, and my overall positive feelings.

Service

121rjd — Mon, 21 Apr 2008 16:52:48 +0000

The limelight which holds posing starts and flashing cameras tends to ignore those who have more meaning in their life. Many Americans, and citizens of other nations, have a problem; they worry about petty meaningless issues. We take pond like problems and turn them into oceans. Obsessed with scandals on television, and what club to go to on a Friday night, we worry about drama in school, and play he-said-she-said games. We remember grudges, and forget friendships, when we are consumed by theses day to day events, we forget the scarifies made by others, and they continue to go unappreciated and unrecognized. Those who put their lives second; in and out of uniform, don’t work for money or fame, they work because they want to make a difference, and they have a desire to serve others. No money, house, car, picture, or fan, can give as much reward to someone as service. Wither it is at a homeless shelter, a poor village in a distant land, or on a bloody battlefield in Iraq, these men and women have chose to humble themselves and serve.

Make no mistake; there is not greater calling in the world. There is a quote by John Stuart Mill that says it all: “War is an ugly thing, but not the ugliest of things. The decayed and degraded state of moral and patriotic feeling which thinks that nothing is worth war is much worse. The person who has nothing for which he is willing to fight, nothing which is more important than his own personal safety, is a miserable creature and has no chance of being free unless made and kept so by the exertions of better men than himself.” Those who serve, especially those in the Armed Forces, have made the ultimate choice. They give us the ability to live life free, and enable others to dance in the limelight. It is time we appreciate their sacrifice. Do not take what they give lightly. Thank them, respect them, honor them, and most of all cherish them. In the end it is those who have chosen to serve that will enjoy the fruits of their labor. They are the most important aspect of society and we must recognize

gym

121rjd — Tue, 15 Apr 2008 12:58:21 +0000

I enjoy goting to the gym, and with the rising health issues in America, I think it is important to get to the gym and workout. So I have attached some great exercises I found for free…try them out…and have some fun!! http://www.bodybuilding.com/fun/workout.htm